Friday, 16 March 2018

Nui Duathlon



LI: I am sharing some of my ideas, feelings and thoughts on my blog about the
     Duathlon  today!

Success Criteria:
  • It makes sense when I read it
  • I have used capital letters and full stops correctly
  • I have had my blogging buddy check my blog before I publish it



Yesterday at WBS we had our duathlon. luckily It was sunny so we weren't in the rain. I felt nervous at the start of the race because I was afraid I would come last. I was very tired at the end because we had to do 2 laps running, 2 laps biking, and another 2 laps running. but because it was sunny we were all hot and sweaty. I had learned to control your breathing so I tried it and it helped a bit.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hunter,

    I like the way you described why you felt nervous, it made me have an idea about how you were feeling.

    Did a buddy or yourself check the success criteria? Who was your buddy? Can you please edit this so I can read it again with capital letters used so that I know it is the beginning of a new sentence. Did you record your 5 facts?

    Thanks
    Storm :)

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